I was immediately thrown off by the juror's question about my position on systems thinking. I think my case studies from last semester would have been helpful in stating my position and creating architectural strategies which relate to the systemic architectural process. I think this unclear stance on systems and the difference between systemic v. systematic negated the architectural ideas about experience, program, displacement and construction which i thought the jury was going to be about. Instead of taking in the juror's comments I was trying to defend ideas that I wasn't expecting to defend. If you have any comments and ideas that were mentioned I'd appreciate if you could re-state those for me.
I think the jurors understood the idea that it was a growing and biological concept and the DNA reference as it applied to other oil platforms and programs. One juror even questioned the twin duplication of architecture on separate but identical platforms.
Some Points:
Clarify and Define Systems thinking; Systemic v. Systematic:
Systematic: Done or acting according to a fixed plan or system.
Systemic: Of or relating to a system, especially as opposed to a particular part
Use Case Studies to illustrate Systemic Devices + Explore and Diagram design process to serve as framework for Systemic Architectural Design Process
Clarify Quotes for possible interpretation.
Extend the architectural DNA to other rigs and programs to exemplify the systemic nature and process of the architecture.
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Nate-
I'm sorry I only timed you, I think you presentation was stronger because of it, it made you think about what you needed to present instead of losing us in rambling, and (as past experience has show me) when pushed and challenged, you tend to rise to the occasion. When you started you were nervous and tense, but then you slowed down, and it was clear you were thinking about what was absolutely necessary for you to communicate to the jury, you slowed down and hit your stride, and I think you got the idea across. So I think I'm going to institute time limits for everyone. When forced to be clear you are, when forced to stand up for an idea you do the work and do. The #1 issue, last semester and this, is that you need to keep your focus on the goal, not every single goal at the same time.
You had a bunch of work, and the stuff that we talked about, the diagrams were definitely the most helpful to the jury at this stage (Daniel and Ian noted them on the way back in the car). The jury also had the distinct impression that you were not listening to them. I bring this up because Daniel's comments in specific were asking about your staying true to the essence of the ideas you were presenting. Beyond his "know the difference between systemic and systematic and decide which it is" he was asking you much much deeper questions.
Also, I think the ideas you are getting across can only be helped by your showing 1) the scuba, 2) the coral 3) the motorcycle and 4) your quick example study on Corbu, and KTA. Those images immediately place your project in a context that the jury can understand and react to.
Now the big thing that I wanted outsider opinion on and you got was the "form" al response of your architecture. The shapes you are taking are again "nate-shapes" there is not alot of meaning to them and they just don't stand up against inquiry, and I'm sorry but "oh I wanted to be poetic" doesn't work when you've chosen a very analytical way of identifying and responding to forces of the site. That's why I will say that the things the jury spent time commenting on and thinking about were the 7 diagrams, the scaled up architectural moments, and the structural/architectural interaction studies. The moments the jury had difficulties is when they perceived your response straying from your ideas.
In the way that your process is developing, I think that determined layering of each successive improvement will bring you to a meaningful form, rather than making shapes which are pleasing.
The process of stenciling is therefore very appropriate, but it is more about the areas of inhabitability, the points of interaction and thresholds with ocean forces that will push and pull the architecture into the shapes that it must be to create this coral-like architectural construct. The forces of the ocean will bring about the shapes; trust your process to get you there.
The other strength in your idea is its development and adaptation over time. Starting with one coral and growing slowly into a whole ecosystem. I think it is utterly necessary that you start with the base drawing of the rig, and build up versions slowly and in increasing complexity as we go. But since this is thesis you are afforded the ability to develop and study year 0, year 1, year 5, year 10, and year 25 all simultaneously and work back and forth across them.
I think there could be no better way to showcase your idea than to have 3-4 mini presentations within the overall final presentation, expressing the change over time of your proposed system, which is at the heart of the idea, rather than just a well documented snapshot of one version, one iteration at one time.
I also liked the study of specific components blown up and studied at a larger scale; the chapel of the sea, a place to experience the solitude was a good idea and response, although you do realize what that design looks like? It may have other meanings than your intended one.
-Andrew
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